What I love about this is the same thing I don't love---that I really have to concentrate on every word or I might miss something. You pack a great deal of emotion into a short amount of space. Plus there is alot of imagery that needs attention. Attention...as in I must pay some.
Not making sense? Yeah...there's alot of that on a Saturday night.
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Date: 2007-06-10 05:08 am (UTC)Not making sense? Yeah...there's alot of that on a Saturday night.