I really like that you write, you know, porn, and also this kind of messy love story that isn't quite about love, but you also mix in the family-type and Marissa's slut spiral and the sudden drama with the Cohens. And Ryan gets to smoke and punch people and be mostly a good guy, but not a perfect hero sex god. It's a satisfying mix, and I really enjoyed this. I hope you keep writing in this universe.
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Date: 2007-06-09 10:38 pm (UTC)