Fabulous piece! Such a great combination of angst and well-earned happiness/growth without being an easy conclusion.
You're really great with setting a visual, and I really loved this:
When the doors opens, it’s him: shirtless, unshaven and barefoot, wearing low-slung ragged jeans, eating peanut butter with a spoon straight from the jar.
Something about the peanut butter is just so descriptive and original.
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Date: 2005-07-22 11:20 pm (UTC)You're really great with setting a visual, and I really loved this:
When the doors opens, it’s him: shirtless, unshaven and barefoot, wearing low-slung ragged jeans, eating peanut butter with a spoon straight from the jar.
Something about the peanut butter is just so descriptive and original.