ext_58552 ([identity profile] mrs-boyscout.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] buffyx 2005-07-22 04:53 pm (UTC)

Loved your story. A few standout moments:

“Um. Love is a battlefield?” -- Thanks to Pat,you truly captured the moment.

"..he has realized that the second tragedy is over, you begin to heal or you begin to die. He’s pretty sure that what he’s been doing is the latter." Oh, such angsty goodness. This so eloquently describes the situation.

“Wear this, or get the fuck off of me. Got it?” -- Gotta' love Safe!Veronica. That was fun-knee.

Great job. Looking forward to more!





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