"She’s pretty sure his words are not a suggestion. Still, she swallows her pride and raps on the door again.
'I’m not leaving,' she calls, and waits."
Ooh, nice parallel to Logan outside her door in ATttD. Was that intentional? Because it's the first thing I thought of.

I really liked this story. I liked that it took them a while -- they didn't just immediately jump into bed -- it took spending some time together before they actually got back together, if that makes sense. Anyway, great job!